Hello again Gary When I refer to a beginning and end I mean the flow thro' the show. The start is perfect I love the plane sequence and getting into Dubrovnik. After some shots of the city we go to shots of the sea then back to the city and this continues back and forth. I was suggesting more grouping i.e take the viewer around the city go into the cloisters, use a shot of the entrance to introduce us to the cloister then move on to the nx place of interest as you go around the city. Take us around the harbour. The way you grouped the fish and fruit markets illustrate this point (loved the tomatos pic by the way). I know exactly what you mean about editing out pics but look at the sequence of I think, dancers/musicians and think if the best half of those pics illustrate the point better thanall the pics together. I also know that I am criticising your show as you want to see it and that is why I stress that my comments are meant for a future edited version for outside consumtion. Regards Snapcam