Hi Bill, Nice try, on the Canon EOSI D 111 use only the center of the focusing spots (this is the sharpest), do not forget the rule of thirds and give your subjects room to move into. On the white Egrets you are a little over exposed losing detail in the feathers, if you want to correct this send me an email. Altogether pretty good, please do not get discouraged by my comments as i am only trying to help you. Rick