In an embrace of memories

[Whirlpool Photoclub]

Dear friends, it is with pleasure that I submit to you
the vision of this new slideshow. 
Thanks for watching and looking forward to your comments ...
Sorry for my bad English.

 

[vbl2007]

Thanks Whirlpool Photoclub! The material is presented very interestingly. How small performance, slaughtered for moments and years. Good luck and health!

Grazie Whirlpool Photoclub! Il materiale è presentato in modo molto interessante. Come  piccola esibizione, massacrata per momenti e anni. Buona fortuna e salute! 

[JRR]

Thought it was an excellent presentation of the history of your club. It is a little long for general audiences, but that is not your intended audience so it is OK.

A nice mix of transition effects, well handled.

Since you asked for feedback, a couple of things:

- I found the opening title difficult to read, I recognize Italian is not my first language, but I think more contrast between the title and the back ground would be better. Maybe a bolder font, with a heavier stroke?

- the finish of the transitions from 1:50-2:29 is a cut, not a fade. I found that to be jarring/disturbing. Perhaps it could be faded out over a second or so?

-The "pocket watch" was very well done. Great work! It would be even better if the hand holding it were in focus.

- I found the part after Covid to be confusing and not clear. I think you were showing the effects/disruptions of Covid, but I couldn't make any of the pictures out and quickly lost interest/became confused,

Overall a nicely produced, well handled AV show with nice music. 

 

[tom95521]

I really like the photo animations on the table and how they fly into view. My only wish is that it was viewable at 60 frames/second instead of 25 frames/second.

Thanks,
Tom