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Stéphane,

To be honest, I really loved your two previous slideshows ("OGM" and especially "J'adore t'écrire"). They are probably the best shows I have ever seen!

I like this one too but I found that the spotlight effect all along the show is a little bit too much and in a way, "tiring".

In my opinion, the spotlight could be bigger maybe ? And maybe you could alternate this effect with full screen composition ?

The pictures are very interesting too but the whole show keeps a little bit (too?) mysterious for me (because of the spotlight maybe and partial vision?).

I Think I undestand the way you presents this story with "zoomed" pictures (shooted close), part of bodies but for my taste it's maybe a little bit too suffocating.

But don't get me wrong, I think your show is excellent. I just give you my personnal perception of it. :)

Anyway, you demonstrated your extreme technical skills with PTE.

  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

Hi,

here is a new slideshow with beta 8u.

Hope you will like it!!

Aucun Express

Bonjour Stéphan,

I like your latest show very much, but think it is harder to 'get into' than your earlier two, which may account for the reservations already posted. Your creations are of much higher artistic level than most (if not all) of the shows in the forum and elsewhere and therefore demand much more of the viewer/listener.

If I may draw an analogy with music; I think Stravinsky can do no wrong, but admit that his later music (like, for example, the Canticum Sacrum) makes much greater demands on the listener than his early, easier compositions.

Do, please, carry on with your inspiring work!

JohnB

P.S. It's 58 years since my last French lesson at school; would it be asking too much to ask you to post the words of your shows (txt files will do) so I can gain a greater understanding of what is going on?

Posted

Ok, here are the lyrics (very spécial style):

Aucun express ne m'emmènera

Vers la félicité

Aucun tacot n'y accostera

Aucun Concorde n'aura ton envergure

Aucun navire n'y va

Sinon toi

Aucun trolley ne me tiendra

Si haut perché

Aucun vapeur ne me fera fondre

Des escalators au chariot ailé

J'ai tout essayé

J'ai tout essayé

{Refrain:}

J'ai longé ton corps

Epousé ses méandres

Je me suis emporté

Transporté

Par delà les abysses

Par dessus les vergers

Délaissant les grands axes

J'ai pris la contre-allée

Je me suis emporté

Transporté

Aucun landau ne me laissera

Bouche bée

Aucun Walhalla ne vaut le détour

Aucun astronef ne s'y attarde

Aucun navire n'y va

Sinon toi

{au Refrain}

Aucun express ne m'emmènera vers

la félicité

Aucun tacot n'y accostera

Aucun Concorde n'aura ton envergure

Aucun navire n'y va

Aucun

{au Refrain}

Posted

Ok, here are the lyrics (very spécial style):

Aucun express ne m'emmènera

Vers la félicité

Aucun tacot n'y accostera

Aucun Concorde n'aura ton envergure

Aucun navire n'y va

Sinon toi

Aucun trolley ne me tiendra

Si haut perché

Aucun vapeur ne me fera fondre

Des escalators au chariot ailé

J'ai tout essayé

J'ai tout essayé

{Refrain:}

J'ai longé ton corps

Epousé ses méandres

Je me suis emporté

Transporté

Par delà les abysses

Par dessus les vergers

Délaissant les grands axes

J'ai pris la contre-allée

Je me suis emporté

Transporté

Aucun landau ne me laissera

Bouche bée

Aucun Walhalla ne vaut le détour

Aucun astronef ne s'y attarde

Aucun navire n'y va

Sinon toi

{au Refrain}

Aucun express ne m'emmènera vers

la félicité

Aucun tacot n'y accostera

Aucun Concorde n'aura ton envergure

Aucun navire n'y va

Aucun

{au Refrain}

Thank you, Stéphane, I will now sit down with my dictionary!

John

  • 1 month later...
Posted

Stéphane,

The presentation is much like life itself: what we see with our personally limited range and perspective

is analogous to the relationship of the highlighted areas to the complete photographs.

I admire your work.

frets3

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